Not much a fan of Dues ex machina
being a writer and all i learned to stay away from that kind of stuff. You know miricales happening for no apparant reason. It's just lazy writing. Not that it's any diss to you. It was still a nice story. I just think it would have been a better ending (less happy) if it went back to the two staring out the window and we find out its all been them dreaming.
I don't know that's just me. nice work though
yes that is very true yet i had a limit of 5 minutes to fit in my heart warming story and wasnt quite sure i fi could make it so i had to make this a fiary tale in the end. i honestly hate the ending my self. you are very true but its not my fault i konw im more capable of thsi5 minutes. i like to make long flashes.
You have to make more man
This was great u have to do another. That's all I got to say.
I just lost an hour and twenty minutes of my life
Not that I'm complaining mind you. So I've just watched all nine epsiodes back to back in the last hour. And it's pretty damn good. And because it's so damn good I'm going to be extra picky. For starters I wished you would have given Sabin a bigger part because he's my fav character, but that's beside the point.
Music is excelent, the songs you choose and the cutting from one to the other is better than most I've heard and the animation is great.
I guess the most trouble I have is with the writing. Only because I'm a writer I guess. The dialogue's a bit cheesy. Way too blunt. You got great character voices for like Gau and Cyan which obviously came from the game but the rest of the characters are all basically the same and and tend to be well cheesy.
A couple of continuty things just to be extra annoying. A) Sabin should have been shocked to know Kefka was still alive because that would have been his first time hearing the news. B) Gau was orphaned as a child and never went to school so he wouldn't have been able to leave a note behind.
But like I said all of this is nit picking you have a great series here, and I can't wait to see how it ends. You can ignore this shit if you want since I'm not giving you any solutions other than getting yourself a writer to work with you on the dialogue. But that's it great job.
Don't worry, Sabin will have a bigger part in future episodes. And about him not knowing about Kefka. He could have heard he was still alive from word of mouth. And even if he didn't know, he was so upset over the loss of Gau that he just wanted to kick ass!
And yes, the music brought this episode to a whole nother level. And about the characters. I'm just doing it the way the characters did. Not everyone had a certain way of talking, it's just what they said. Yeah Gau was orphaned but he still learned how to talk...very little. So that means he can write...very little. Thx for the review!
Dude that sucked!!!
But in a goodway. Don't listen to any of these fools i like the dramatic twist it makes it stand out. Man I really thought Luigi was gonna come back but then it was just Toad with a cross. Sad but good. Keep it up can't wait to see how it all ends
jesgovan11111 u r a f*cking moron
Bush wasn't elected u moron Gore won the majorty vote Bush won off electorial votes. Gore rightfully won that damn election. So learn ur shit before u decide to talk shit.
great movie i love the series and i servely hate bush. You should expand on the moron scene and do the state of california next. I hail from cali but dude we are f*cking morons for having the damn terminator as our govenor.
great show keep up the work
MORE MORE I WANT MORE
yeah that pretty much says it. nice job. sequel!!!!!!
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I loved it man
The series was cool. A little anti climatic at the end though, but the lego man said it best what a comp out. I was just wondering though what was that song you used when they were flying down the portal i remembered hearing it in the Two Towers trailers but it ain't on the sound track. hmm just for the song alone u got major points.
Sabin Yay!!!
This is hands down my faviorte. (And not just because Sabin is my faviorte character) It's funny as hell and I love the series. But I do really like Sabin!!! Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see how this ends.
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